torsdag 15. oktober 2009

Har vi en forfatterspire her?

Jeg vet ikke hvor mange av dere som kjenner Kingdom Hearts. Et spill som er laget av Disney. Det er historier om forskjellige helter, reiser,konger og mysterier. Våpen og magi som jeg har forstått det. Vel, uansett. Min datter (13) har overassket meg totalt i dag. Hun er kanskje ikke kalles for den “ivrigste” på skolen. Men er flink og gjør så godt hun kan. Men i dag kom hun plutselig å sa at hun hadde skrevet en historie. Ok? Om hva? Jo, hun hadde laget sin egen fortsettelse, eller episode av Kingdom Hearts.
Jeg leste historien uten egentlig å skjønne poenget der, men hun fortalte ivrig i vei om de forskjellige karakterene og hva deres historie er før dette. Uansett… poenget mitt er at jeg synes det er godt skrevet uansett om jeg ikke kjenner historien eller ikke. Så jeg tillater meg å publisere den her også. Litt stolt jeg da. Hadde ingen anelse om at hun likte å skrive i det hele tatt.

Historien har hun selv publisert også her.

Sora was sitting on the beach. Relaxing and chilling. He was so happy. that he have got everything back. After 2 one year, he have finally made it. The sun was hot and their was no wind. The sky was clear and the birds was singing. It was so peaceful.
However...
Their still was something that bothered Sora. he always had nightmares. The same every night...the blood flowing everywhere, Humans being ripped apart, limb by limb, The fear... and the worst of them all, Watching Kairi and Riku being killed. the head ripped of kairis shoulders. Rikus body being ripped in half. It was just horrible to watch, but this night...Soras life will change...
Sora laid on his bed. he was afraid to sleep. thinking of all those nightmares. Yet very tired.  He stood up, got dressed and went out to take a walk. It was summer, so it wasn't that cold. ''What could those dreams mean?'' he though to himself. Wile he was walking, he suddenly felt dizzy. He tried to stand but he fell down and Everything went black.
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He woke up in a strange place. Everything was black, yet, a little light was shining through. ''Where am i? what's going on!?'' said Sora. he tried to follow the light, but then, he heard a Voice. ''That is the wrong way.'' said the voice. Sora turned around to see what person could have called. ''Y-you.'' It was His nobody. It was Roxas. Sora was nervous. He had never though he would see Roxas infront of him.
''When i and Namine met, i was really happy. I didn't fall into the darkness like the other nobodies and i REALLY regret than now.'' said Roxas whit a dark and cruel voice.
''Why do you regret that? You should be happy you didn't got corrupted. You see what darkness does to you.'' Roxas let out a dark laughter.
''Listen to yourself! You sound like a fool. Don't you know who you really are?'' Roxas's eyes where glowing red. Sora where a little afraid, but he didn't show it to Roxas. ''What do you mean by that!? Of course i know who i am! i am the Keyblade master!'' Roxas laughet even more when he heard that. ''tell me, have something been eating on you lately? Something that scares you?'' Sora was frozen in fear. ''Roxas was walking towards sora. ''you are not any keyblade master. You are a cold blooded killer who, whit 5 others, where taken from our home. Remember how you even got to the island?''
Sora didn't remember his past. He had completely forgot. Suddenly, the memories of his nightmares where flashing inside Soras head. It was painful an Sora screamed in pain, whit his hands on his head, he fell down on his knees. ''You don't have any past anymore. Namine cancelled it. I visited her after that. She was collaborating whit him, so i killed her.'' Roxas grinned. Sora jumped up on his feet whit tears in his eyes. ''YOU WHAT!?!?! WHY DID YOU DO THAT!?!''  Sora freaked out. Whit a mix emotions of anger and fear. He fell down on his knees again.  Roxas stood over him. His eyes where dark and empty. ''What is the point of having any friends if they don't even like you? You only have a miserable life. All you ever done is to run around and fight whit that keyblade of yours. You have to admit that you don't have a normal life, But i can change that. Come whit me Sora, you must wake up from this endless dream, your nature is to kill. Kill kairi and Riku and get of this island.''. Sora screamed. ''NO, NEVER!!!! I WILL NEVER KILL THEM!!!!''  Roxas grinned. ''Of course you don't, but you don't have any choice. I where good too, but i followed my heart, and i woke up.'' ''YOU DONT HAVE A HEART!'' screamed Sora. ''Sora, the humans have used us. But you and i have a special ability that other humans don't have, but you must discover that ability yourself. Remember when you where little? You where teased and beaten.'' Sora soak his head. He remembered it. Everyone teased him. Everyone tried to make him cry...''Those words where painful. If you wanna get rid of those feelings, you must kill. You love to kill, you just don't remember it...yet.'' Said Roxas
Suddenly, Sora had a flashback. He saw him, A boy who looked a bit like him, only whit a blue shirt and brown shorts. He had a set of googles on his head, and those eyes...they where brown and dark. He couldn't remember his name or voice, but he had seen him before some place. Maybe he where Soras real friend. Mabye Roxas was right. Mabye... ''See? this isn't you.'' Roxas whent down on his knee and reached out his hand. ''Come Sora...wake up.'' Sora reached out his hand as well and he hold Roxas's hand. A blue light surrounded them. The whole place lighted up and Roxas disappeared. Sora lifted his arms up and closed his eyes. a weird smoke-like glow escaped from his body and reached out in the sky. And then, the whole place turned white.
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Sora woke up on the beach. Same place where he had fainted. He stood up. His eyes where dark and empty. The demon had finally woke up. Now...its kill time. Soras first target is Riku. Sora started walking...
Roxas laid on a dark hill, looking up the sky. ''Now, 1 more to go...''
                THE END

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4 kommentarer:

Gamleheksa sa...

Dette er dessverre litt utenfor min svære, men det er skikkelig artig når barna overrasker positivt!
Syns å ha sett at det er noen på fire bein som skal starte i morgen. Lykke til!

Lappedamen sa...

Meget imponerende av en 13 åring. God fantasi har hun i alle fall, så det er bare å oppmuntre henne videre. Virker som det er godt gjennomtenkt.

AnitaH2 sa...

Kommer til å gå både Jordan og King i næringa etterhvert!

Anne på Moseplassen sa...

Jeg er nå mest imponert over at hun skriver på så god engelsk jeg da!
Teksten var fin og fangende, godt jobba!

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